Wednesday, November 19, 2008

...The Haunting.... Comments

Rating: 2.9

i lie here alone
upon the dark abandoned piece
of beach that we once claimed
in love...
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wardha jawdat
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ata khan 05 April 2009

Flows like a beautiful quiet stream and still says it all The ability to say so much in such few lines is nothing but..... brilliance 10+

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Kesav Easwaran 21 November 2008

emotions spilling out...spilling out, over a silently witnessing otherwise soothing sandy bed carrying the loving memories of life that once was...well done, Wardha...10

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Fiona Davidson 19 November 2008

Descriptive piece...really makes me feel like I'm there on that lonely beach with you...thanks for this one....

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 19 November 2008

amazing way of expression...pain weaved into words...wonderfully...

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