i lie here alone
upon the dark abandoned piece
of beach that we once claimed
in love...
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emotions spilling out...spilling out, over a silently witnessing otherwise soothing sandy bed carrying the loving memories of life that once was...well done, Wardha...10
Descriptive piece...really makes me feel like I'm there on that lonely beach with you...thanks for this one....
amazing way of expression...pain weaved into words...wonderfully...
Flows like a beautiful quiet stream and still says it all The ability to say so much in such few lines is nothing but..... brilliance 10+