Monday, April 19, 2010

The Haunting Of The Mermaid Comments

Rating: 5.0

The mermaid was dead, of that they were sure
They carried her out, to the green pastures

They buried her deep, and there left a cross
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Patti Masterman
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Jim Troy 07 August 2011

Now this one just grabs hold of me and shakes me till I shiver with delight. I hope you have more like these in that portion of your masterful well. This I could just read forever.... I prefer it above all else. Your imagination is such a finely honed tool........... Jim T

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Constance K Yost 28 July 2011

Oh my! What a great story poem! ! ! Verses 3,4 and 5 are really great! ! ! Enjoyed every bit of it. Constance

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