Sunday, October 28, 2007

The Haunting Of Halloween Comments

Rating: 5.0

Whoosh! went the candle
Slam! went the door!

Suddenly I had the feeling
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Dee Daffodil
COMMENTS
Chuck Audette 05 November 2007

Just phantastic! The plot just gets deeper and Dee-per! It just ghost to show that you've got a super-natural writer's talent! -chuck

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Zen Bojczuk 01 November 2007

Dee.... really, really, really good. I loved your last year's Halloween poem and I adore this one too. Can't wait until next year. You definitely have a talent for suspense and mystery. Zen PS. How much do you want for the movie rights?

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Diane Violet 01 November 2007

Dee, fabulous haunting tale…scary and gripping from beginning to end. Hugs, Diane

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Barry Van Allen 31 October 2007

Dee, SEE! ... I told you that you were mean! Why else would you do this! Scaring everyone like that! ... well done on Halloween ! : -) B.V.A.

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Ernestine Northover 28 October 2007

Hey Dee, what a monster of a poem. Held my attention all the way through and what a great storyline. Excellent piece of writing, a real spooky tale. Well done indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XX

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Elysabeth Faslund 28 October 2007

This will definitely work for Halloween! ! ! The beginning was like Shirley Jackson's 'Haunting of Hill House'...you were doing what Eleanor did...but, you gave it a twist...GOOD twist! ! ! xxElysabeth

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