Whoosh! went the candle
Slam! went the door!
Suddenly I had the feeling
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Dee.... really, really, really good. I loved your last year's Halloween poem and I adore this one too. Can't wait until next year. You definitely have a talent for suspense and mystery. Zen PS. How much do you want for the movie rights?
Dee, fabulous haunting tale…scary and gripping from beginning to end. Hugs, Diane
Dee, SEE! ... I told you that you were mean! Why else would you do this! Scaring everyone like that! ... well done on Halloween ! : -) B.V.A.
Hey Dee, what a monster of a poem. Held my attention all the way through and what a great storyline. Excellent piece of writing, a real spooky tale. Well done indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XX
This will definitely work for Halloween! ! ! The beginning was like Shirley Jackson's 'Haunting of Hill House'...you were doing what Eleanor did...but, you gave it a twist...GOOD twist! ! ! xxElysabeth
Just phantastic! The plot just gets deeper and Dee-per! It just ghost to show that you've got a super-natural writer's talent! -chuck