Tuesday, March 30, 2010

The Hate That I Hate Comments

Rating: 4.8

I hate the hate that resides in me now

I hate the hate that is so heavy it weighs me down
I hate the hate that keeps my emotions tightly wound
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Adalie Hettie
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Kelly Edwards 07 October 2012

When was this written?

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X_shay_x X_broken_x 12 April 2012

i think this is a really good poem also dont let people hate on u and your poetry because u r really talented

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Christian Torres 23 February 2011

wow i love this poem

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Bob Johnson 28 June 2010

Love and accolades have come before me. Really? This lurching, unrhythmic, cheap collection of rhymes is not a poem. I nearly strangled reading it aloud. I wonder: did the previous commenters let themselves *hear* this piece so bad it could not even be given the commendation of being called doggerel. How in God's name is this on a best-of list? Shameful. Go back to those pencil sketches you probably think are art also, Adalie. (God, I hope you don't think you write poetry.) Boo-Hisss! ! !

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Tee gon 13 June 2010

I love this poem...so good!

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Kymyata Parks 29 May 2010

Talentedd, i love it.

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