Saturday, January 15, 2022

The Harvesting Machine Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Harvesting Machine


It was a little late
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Susan Williams 24 January 2022

so very touching--- and so like a young child to see in nature what we no longer see because our souls have grown tough---beautiful moment recorded for all time here, my friend---5 stars and wish I could sprinkle it with a thousand more because that poem put me in that field under that moon

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 January 2022

Thank you, Susie. Childhood is is bundle of innocence.

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Nabakishore Dash 16 January 2022

How innocent the little boy was! Intelligent crafting.

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 January 2022

Very true. Thank you, Nabkishore.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 January 2022

A captivating poem.............10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 January 2022

I loved the little boy who climbed on to your shoulders to see the moon!

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 January 2022

Thank you Geeta. He is such a lovely boy, so very intelligent for his age. And so fond of me, as I am of him.

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Rebecca Navarre 15 January 2022

So beautifully written! .. I can visualize these precious moments shares! .. A poem to cherish! .. Again just Wow! .. So awesome and sweet! ..+++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 January 2022

Thank you for reading this message

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Rebecca Navarre 15 January 2022

Oh, Wow! .. Such a beautiful, precious story/poem! .. However sweet and innocent of him to ask the moon to supervise! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 January 2022

That is the true innocence, which we lose when we grow up. Becca

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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