The Harsh Reality Comments

I really liked the descriptive word and the imagery you use it has a lot of meaning and I really relate to that! ! Its beautiful! !

I love the last two lines. This is a really good poem with some great rhymes. These, I really enjoy. The pain is real and tragic. That comes through well in this poem. A fine presentation. I also like the structure of your poems. Well done! GW62

I love it yours truly and nobody has ever written me anything in the world beofre never mind anything as beautiful as this, I will treasure it forever I will also treasure you in my heart forever :) x