Monday, February 19, 2018

The Hardest Part Is Letting Go Comments

Rating: 5.0

Last night I had no peaceful sleep
I saw no beauty in the dawn
If time indeed heals a heartache
I don't think I'll last that long
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Chris Embrick
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Practicing Poetess 31 March 2018

A beautiful and accurate picture of grief. 'The mountain's on my soul'........ 'I don't think I'll last that long'...... I remember when my fiance' died, being afraid to go to sleep at night. I was afraid I'd die in my sleep and not awaken, so great was the pain. This one deserves a 10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 February 2018

Heart felt depiction has been made in this blue poem that brings lamentation and condolence. The title of this poem is appropriated. Thank u dear sir for sharing this.

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Sandra Feldman 19 February 2018

I never thought someone could transmit spiritual pain so exactly and with so much feeling. I felt your pain so much, I cried. Poetry can do those moving things when there's poetic genius behind. Please accept my most heart felt condolences. I know what it is, I'm so sorry....

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George Krokos 19 February 2018

Very well written and expressed. Please accept my condolences.

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Chris Embrick

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