Tuesday, December 28, 2021

The Harbinger Of War - Tanka Comments

Rating: 4.5

He unites one group
And sows hate and division
In other people.
He creates great confusion.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Denis Mair 17 July 2023

Yes, and along the way, language is defiled. Language was created to be the sacred vessel of human connection. Poetry is our gesture to re-sanctify that vessel.

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Patriotism is a misnomer. Actually, "patriotism' misplaced is the harbinger of wars..

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Nabakishore Dash 17 July 2023

Harbinger of all wars are the rulers and this is exactly what they do.

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Anjandev Roy 17 January 2022

Fantastic write....thanks for sharing...

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Kevin Patrick 08 January 2022

This can be said of most politicians, especially those of a tyrannical disposition. True words have never been spoken. Well crafted

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 December 2021

A beautiful Tanka. Loved it.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 28 December 2021

I am not familiar with the Tanka form, but it any case, tanka you very much for this poem!

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 28 December 2021

Brilliant! ! ! ! ! Very well written.5*****

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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