Sunday, May 28, 2017

The Happiness Machine Comments

Rating: 5.0

You cannot trap it in a box;
it's not a thing you tightly grip.
It's in the breeze of summertime,
as rain is falling drop by drip.
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 28 May 2017

A true feeling. We have to practise to feel it.So nicely rendered.

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Barry Middleton 29 May 2017

Yep. We have to pay attention to the things that matter. Thanks for commenting.

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Rajnish Manga 28 May 2017

Entire poem carries the spirit of the poem but the last stanza is such a treat to the heart and soul. This is a cut above the rest 'Happiness resides within.... yet it is almost everywhere'. Thanks a lot.

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Barry Middleton 28 May 2017

Thanks Rajnish. The concluding lines of a poem are always the most important. Glad you found these to be a treat to the heart.

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