Monday, September 4, 2017

The Happening Comments

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This hallowed happening
Looked upon as from hoisted high places
The flight fancied free fervoured finches
The third ripple
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Glen Kappy 04 January 2018

So I've been reading your postings from earliest then forward and came on this one, Loza. This reminds me of the first or one of the first by you I read. Exactly what you’re expressing here eludes me, but I’m drawn by the images, by the alliterations. It draws because it intrigues... Have to sgn off now. Be well! -Glen

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 November 2017

To undulate in pure! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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