The Happening Comments

Brilliant narration through this very touching...and deeply expressed piece Sam....Such a sad read...knowing that this particular thing continues...and will each day grow.....very well written my brother 10+++

very touchy.. & the real fact is hidden in it.. may be i hav lacked something.

Many innocent lives lost For the kid it’s his world For the government, it’s just a number. Nice depiction! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Given 10

This is a moving account of the effect of terrorism on innocent people, women and children, men going about their daily business, life being normal, and all of that shattered in an instant by a cowardly terrorist's bomb, samanyan. It is overall a well written poem, and a very expressive one as well. Sadly, terrorism is here to stay, since there will always be evil minds and cowardly people, jealous of the freedoms of others. Like the vermin they are, they live in the shadows, in their holes in the ground, and lack any semblance of the honor of a warrior. They pretend to be religious fanatics, yet violate the most sacred tenents of their own religions. Because one dislikes another culture it does not give them the right to try to destroy it. Your fine poem does not mention all this directly, but it is there, inbetween the lines, and like the disaster in Mumbai, no reader will forget your words or the havoc these cowardly terrorists caused that fine day. Carl.

This runs like another terrorist's attack story.

your righteous anger...........but sad reality of our times..........good write.10+++

some innocent people are victims of this well planned movements...some movements have good purpose, some are just to destroy and make disturbances to people..all i know is, we hve freedom to live, only GOD could make the final judgement..not the people..cheers to this poem, it is nice.. naizz

dis poem highlight's hw cruel eveythin is gettin...i lykd the way u put it 2gther...

Raising the awareness level and speaking out on terror. A child ravaged by war and terror is bound to fear and hate. We were given free will and suffer the consequences of people who have no feeling for Humanity. It seems that we are powerless to stop the people who are grasping in their greed for land, money, natural resources or who just feel the need to dominate. The Natural Balance is gone, we must find a way to regain it. I pray alot.....very good writing Linda

what a heart drowning piece..i feel goose bumps on my skin....a piece on reality...that's happening now...your piece makes me cry with sadness on what's going on now...bombs to kill innocent ones...bombs to end everyone's future...everyone's dream...why? who is to blame....? with your piece i remember the letter i have read yesterday from a book...'