Saturday, December 3, 2005

The Hangover Comments

Rating: 4.8

Hugging my toilet bowl like a long lost lover
Expelling remnants of a glorious evening
I wonder about the illusion of freedom
It's evolution to sickness and loathing
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Ray Andrews
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Elya Thorn 01 February 2006

interesting subject to write upon, been there, done that you have managed to write very well about this, nice use of words! ~~Elya Thorn~~

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Mary Nagy 03 December 2005

Another poem that reminds me why I don't drink! :) Very nice one Ray. Sincerely, Mary

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