Tuesday, December 13, 2016

The Hand Of Unseen Fate Comments

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a single solitary snowball fast thrown
rolling innocent down snow covered slopes
gives birth fatal to an unforseen avalanche
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Terence George Craddock
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Mihaela Pirjol 15 December 2016

Apart from its philosophical profundity, I am incline to imagination of a white winter this time of year...but, it is just my imagination, as winters here are never white.

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Terence Craddock 11 December 2023

The blessing and certainty of a warm climate, here winter can be white in some regions at low lying levels when a cold front moves in; but even in Christmas summer here snow can fall sometimes, in the land of four seasons in one day.

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Terence Craddock 12 January 2024

I wrote the poem 'Four Seasons: In One Day Kiwi Weather', inspired by a comment on my poem 'The Hand Of Unseen Fate', by the poet Mihaela Pirjol and dedicated to Mihaela Pirjol.

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