Sunday, March 10, 2019

The Hand Of Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wives cries, "you have no time for me".
Mom's says, "you have no time for our family".
Kids shout out, "you have no time for us".
Self-retorts, "I have no time for me".
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Eden Trinidad
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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 June 2019

A top-notch frontline poem, dear ate Eden.....10+++++

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Chinedu Dike 11 March 2019

Well conceived and nicely brought forth in persuasive expressions with insight. A philosophical piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing Eden and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 March 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Eden. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Eden Trinidad 11 March 2019

Thank you for giving time to read my poem

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