Friday, October 20, 2006

The Hammeru-Ha Bound Comments

Rating: 4.5

The laughs the giggle’s, the hugs and the kisses
The running around and the teases
The care and the share
Make the flammable fence for friends
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Berhan Mehari
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Peter A. Crowther 31 October 2006

Nicely contrived metaphor of the circle of friendship that both binds and excludes. I like the alliteration of a 'flammable fence for friends' :) Another good poem; keep 'em coming!

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