Sunday, August 2, 2020

The Hamelin Tragedy Comments

Rating: 4.7

My heart sunk while I was standing
On the pavements of Hamelin town
Grieving along with its mothers' souls
The disappearance of their children
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 August 2020

A poignant piece of work...highly expressive! My favourite lines: Like a hungry dragon Mount Kooppenberg/Opened its mouth and swallowed them/It was the brutal revenge of a strange piper/That made him lead the kids to the mount....pulsating expression. Brilliantly penned..10

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Thank you dear Dr. Dillip for the comments that hail me to the heights of creative satisfaction.

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Kostas Lagos 02 August 2020

A strange tale indeed.Excellent poem!

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Thank you very much dear poet Kostas Lagos for the commrnts

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 August 2020

Behind this pied piper of the magical tune is hidden the tragedy of life.....

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Thank you very much dear poet Mahtab. Though a legendary tale it still has the power to move people's heart

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