Friday, August 4, 2017

The Halves And Half Nots Comments

Rating: 3.5

My moon's half full,
Your's, half new.
When looking up,
See what suits you.
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Francie Lynch
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Seamus O Brian 14 August 2017

The bouncy, almost whimsical rhythm of this piece belies and cruelly contrasts the pain of heartache and broken relationships that lies submerged beneath the lines. Finely crafted writing, but that's your trademark, of course. :) s

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Francie Lynch

Francie Lynch

Monaghan, Ireland
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