Wednesday, April 10, 2019

The Hallowed Black Pot Comments

Rating: 5.0

Passed by Aso the other day;
The hilly enclave in the midst of the three towns,
And witnessed the dance of the money bags.
Clad in robes of greed and lucre,
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Valentine Ezike
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Chinedu Dike 11 April 2019

Really an insightful creation, written in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. The greed and selflessness of the ruling class are aptly captured in the piece with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Valentine. Remain enriched.

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Valentine 12 April 2019

I am flattered Chinedu. Did you mean selfishness?

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Kim Barney 10 April 2019

A fascinating story, Valentine. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Valentine 12 April 2019

Thanks a lot Kim.

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