The Guy I Saw Comments

An engagingly penned close observation. Lovely. t x

(I don't REMEMBER seeing you? ? If I catch your eye again I'll smile...) . I like how a five year old poem, describing a specific memory previous to it, is still vividly pertinent now, due to a wonderfully brief, sharp and almost bullet-point style. And '...elegant planes shifting...' is just one of those lines... brilliant. S x