You pass...
A whisp out of the corner of my eye.
Barely seen.
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A good poem full of honest emotions.14 is a good age to start. I am going backwards and making time. I hope we can be friends and share deep emotions, and reflections on these. Let me make a poem on the same feeling for you.
I want to speak to you, tell you how I feel, wonderful write, I congratulate you. good write.
What can I say? I completely relate to this (also, where is the girl who wouldn't fall for such a guy?) I think your voice here is really beautiful. A 10, and I'm adding this to my poem list.