Sunday, December 15, 2013

The Guitar And The Leather Jacket Comments

Rating: 5.0

You pass...
A whisp out of the corner of my eye.
Barely seen.
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Ocklawaha Holt
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Nika Mcguin 18 April 2014

What can I say? I completely relate to this (also, where is the girl who wouldn't fall for such a guy?) I think your voice here is really beautiful. A 10, and I'm adding this to my poem list.

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Doris Cornago 22 December 2013

A good poem full of honest emotions.14 is a good age to start. I am going backwards and making time. I hope we can be friends and share deep emotions, and reflections on these. Let me make a poem on the same feeling for you.

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Gajanan Mishra 16 December 2013

I want to speak to you, tell you how I feel, wonderful write, I congratulate you. good write.

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