The Guilty Father! ! Comments

It's very touching and sad anju! When in winter we touch the fire but in a hot summer we extinguish it?

very sad narrative poem...touching......10++++++++

It is an essential piece that borders on the father's guilt throughout with the ending revealing his son's steadfast love for him. Touching.

'As i went near- My heart began to tear, The words became clear- And they were so dear' Beautifully written and also very touching poem. You always write a meaningful poem with deep language. Great. Enjoy reading it