Thursday, November 3, 2011

The Guilt Of Innocence... Comments

Rating: 4.8

Sentenced to death for a crime I did not commit,
Execution at dawn... such a cliché,
All of my last request's denied,
Morning arrives on the final day of my existance,
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Smoky Hoss 07 November 2011

After reading this poem, how could anyone but have mercy. Very good writing.

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Hans Vr 03 November 2011

Melodious verses. Content sounds more like cosmic nightmare :) That great last line, I seem to find under all (?) your poems is again a fantastic end to this poem.

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Silentpoet Grl 03 November 2011

Wow. Great poem. i Really like it. But how sad.

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