The Guiding Gleam Comments

Nice syllabic meter with a good cadence to it. I was a little confused with the intent in these two lines: and guides the ships if they are right or are drifting away at all... do you mean they are on the right course? in the first line. And in the second isn't it 'or aren't drifting away at all'? I like the metaphorical intent in the poem. it guides the ships as if on course and they don't drift away at all.. is this your meaning? I'm not sure. a poet friend RH Peat

a profound metaphorical write on life and its journey through the tumultous twists and turns

Very good, this one.

Oh what a wonderful comparison: 'Within the heart where vibrant waves exuberantly rise and fall many ships of black and white steadily on the waters crawl.... ' +10

This poem brought up mind into travel. It has been nicely written… in this journey, yes, there’s always a gleam of light to guide us on our way, depends on our chosen paths. Thanks for the invitation by the way. Good luck, best wishes and P.S write more. :)