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Sweet love...sweet poem....10

well done, great poem

Mellifluous poem..............10

This poem has a very sweet lilting tone....Although I think you are too hard on yourself in the last two lines...Lovely piece otherwise 10

sweet, sweet write.... really sweet and with grace... as graceful as Lady Grace... i love this, Red lepz... 10+++ Maia

'Without you I am a Waste of time.'... No single person is a waste of time.. It's ppl who waste other ppl's time good write....

Hi Graceful Lady - It is pleasure to be a guest on your site and comment on this fragrant poem. The poem has beautiful structure and beautiful lyrics - to melt you Guest's Heart just as yours has been melted by him. V 1 Sound is an amazing expression of energy with thousands of frequencies and harmonies and pitches. God in his wisdom has given us the gift of hearing to analyse and enjoy the magic of sound. Voice - lyrics - melody but the greatest of these is voice. V 2 The sensuousness of rhythm - tempo - pianissimo. V 3 Tenderness - attentiveness - timing - so so important in TRUE LOVE. V 4 The melody lingers on - this is so so beautiful. 'Let me hold you forever - forever you'll be in my heart - without you am nothing - without you am waste of time' - AWESOME. Thank for sharing Lady G - it scores a MAX. Love you lots in Poetry - JOHN X