The Grounds Crew, Summer Of '76 (Revised) Comments

this is in the spirit of that section i commented on the other day, drawn from memory it it so far in the distance to have become clear to you, you can speak in a slightly detached sense that allows a sense of good will and wonder to come in, like talking about another life. the italics and exclamation marks add to this effect. probably sections 1 and 3 were my favourites. for me this is some of your best work.