The Grieving Funeral Director Comments

Wonderful joy is here expressed with satisfaction running over like a river. Well done my friend!

I really like this write. I always thought that they had one of the toughest jobs around. No doubt that they also feel sadness when someone dies. The Funeral Director plays a very important part in this type of business. Nicely written.

Pro tip: Shorter lines make better poetry. Otherwise you risk descending into a badly paragraphed dramatic monologue! Other than that, good work paying attention to rhyme.

, , , loved the way you wrote this one, , , , the choice of words was great, , , , a tough topic to write on but you made it look quiet easy, , , , ,

A descriptive and delicately told story in this poem delivered with great compassion and empathy. An insight into a profession that deals everyday with sadness, but carefully with great kindness celebrates those that have lived with those left behind.