Thursday, September 8, 2016

The Grey Haired Lovers Comments

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The Grey Haired Lovers

Deep inside the wasteland
a tune hung on the air
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Annette Aitken
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Christopher Tye 15 September 2016

Very heartfelt poem, it must be hard when a lifelong companion is lost.

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Terry Craddock 12 September 2016

'For fifty years he held her close they laughed they cried, they sometimes joked they often spoke of days they shared of dashing youths without a care. The grey haired lovers in full embrace with sunshine beaming from their face fingers intwinded as if were one a lifes long love so filled with fun they made a daughter, then a son.' this is a sorry well worth telling, beautiful

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Annette Aitken 09 September 2016

I'm so happy that it seems that a lot of people can relate to this...it's like relationships were strong back then......for some.....lucky ones...

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Tom Billsborough 09 September 2016

It really is a beautiful poem, Annette. My parents never stopped loving each other. sadly my mother was relatively young when she died and my father was never the same again and never remarried. So I can identify with your poem in a very real way.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2016

In full embrace! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Annette Aitken 09 September 2016

Edward as always thanks for reading and commenting.

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