Wednesday, July 11, 2007

The Greenie Comments

Rating: 5.0

A frog, dark green, sat in the gutter
and waited for the frightened flutter
of insects native to these parts.
He heard, that evening, just farts.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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H this is brilliant. And what are you on? ! ! ! ! ! ! :) t x

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Linda Ori 12 July 2007

It seems you have a fascination with frogs at present, and another delightful read, Herbert. 'It's not easy being green' as Kermit laments, and as this little frog will most certainly agree! Linda :)

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Patricia Gale 11 July 2007

Herbert you are such a delight to read! I enjoyed the rhyme, the story and the meaning in the end... well thats about all of the poem isn't it...Next time I need a pick me up I will be clicking through your pages (which will take quiet awhile you have so many!) Never, ever stop writing you are a blessing!

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Ted Sheridan 11 July 2007

I took less time to read than to find by the pick and type method of going through what appears to be a lifetime of writes.... I enjoyed it as much as the poster...'Never Give Up'. Thanks

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