Thursday, July 2, 2009
The Green Umbrella Comments
Rating: ★5.0
At noon, under the green umbrella
I lay on my back to watch the leafy waves
And the alternating luster of the sun,
Falling occasionally to the lull of lazy abandon
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Sandra Fowler
03 July 2009
A superb metaphorical write. The interplay of light and darkness makes this a very meaningful poem picture. One of your best, Raveendran.10/10. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra
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7/22/2025 8:31:37 AM # 1.0.0
Green is the perfect color for your umbrella - green being the color of the Anahata Chakra, the heart center; And love being at the core of your thoughts of black and white, darkness and light, sorrow and joy. You have described the paradox of opposites with great ingenuity and skill in this fine poem and your final line leaves the reading wondering.... Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥