Monday, October 28, 2024

The Green Heart Beats, Resilient—aware Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beneath the weight of brooding skies,
In tangled vines where silence lies,
hope flickers soft like morning dew,
and each droplet says a prayer anew.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 04 November 2024

A poem woven with silken words.

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Rob Lamberton 01 November 2024

An emerald light of promise!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 30 October 2024

Dauntless nature is so lovely and amazing. A wonderfully written, enjoyable poem.5*****

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Rebecca Navarre 30 October 2024

Each droplet says a prayer anew! .. Beauty that's simply breathtaking, , , each word, each line....++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 30 October 2024

Painted with such deep beauty! .. Beyond #'S And Stars! ... Again just, , , WOW! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 30 October 2024

Filled with such strength, beauty, and hope! .. A pleasure to read! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 30 October 2024

More beautiful then words could say! .. Iove this! ..

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David Wood 28 October 2024

Excellent poem with perfect rhyme.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 October 2024

Love it Asim Bravo! ! ! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 28 October 2024

An excellent and profound piece.... thank u... friend...

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M. Asim Nehal

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