Tuesday, May 19, 2009

The Green Dot Comments

Rating: 4.5

A green dot was wandering one day,
Where is its spot, where it can lay! ,
It delayed its arrival,
And all the green is now gone,
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Mustafa Ghuneim
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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 May 2009

'Where are the other green, where is its stain? Forever the search, Forever it will feel the pain, To be away from the other green dots.' 10 added to this lovely and touchy poem.

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