Saturday, August 24, 2013

The Greatest Gift Comments

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The greatest gift to youngsters
Must be the mobile phone,
That tiny sacred instrument
Which all of them now own.
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John Carter Brown
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Philip Carter 11 October 2013

Love it, especially the last line.

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Smoky Hoss 15 September 2013

True words of wisdom.

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 31 August 2013

Nice write my limerick's master. My uncle had two accident due to texting while biking. These dainty devices should be used in correct way. Speechless

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Joseph Anderson 30 August 2013

Watch out-You might get run over.A fun read about about a not so funny situation. So true everywhere. Your musical efforts are very good

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Valerie Dohren 25 August 2013

Brilliant John, made me laugh, all so true. How did we manage without them when we were kids, or even. Ow as adults.

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Mary Forrester 24 August 2013

John, just love reading your poetry, my family and I look forward to reading them. By the way we enjoyed your foray into music with Valerie, loved your voice.

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