The Great Valuable Gift On Christmas Day Comments
“Wow! It’s Christmas, happiness coming
Now for the gift welcoming loving
Then to the church to bow before God
And to the market to buy me a gift
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You could enact your play, elaborate and make it into a Musical Ballet - A Christmas Play. Wonderful flow of words so dramatic and full of energy. Try it this year for christmas. Angel
Blessed is the child, Who gift from the heart Rest your words ever in the hearts of readers........10
Dear Aiswarya, Your poem impressed me more than i can say. God says that it is far better to give than to receive, you depicted that so well in your wonderful poem. I am happy that in today's world there still are talented children who have a pure loving soul as well as a good English! Keep up the good work!
Lots of thought and detail. You captured the christmas spirit haha and i am saying this in february.
That was avery fine contribution to the spirit and meaning of Christmas and a great message for your fewllow students. I enjoyed, Loyd
Your heart is dancing all through this poem. Your music comes from heaven. Keep your light on. Very nice
that's great! i love it as my poets! i think it is my poet, becouse it is a part of my mind and my soul. keep on please!
Sweet poem just like dear... It's so lovely writin... I enjoyed th poem... Good work.. Keep doing your good work... Love u
that was beautiful, you have strong words that i couldnt be able to put on paper. you are reallyyyyy good :)
You really are a good poetess... infact excellent, you really enjoy christmas I'm also a christian that's if you are...kk then keep up the good work...
dear young girl, your poem is well written and very sincere. hope you'll like my 'Christmas theme'. bye
This is nice i like your poem Sierra
Very precocious, indeed! The ultimate gift on Christmas is love. And you can't have love unless you share it with someone whom you love. Precious and priceless!
Wow only 11. I'm impressed. I am not a poet but I was touched by yours.
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Giving to others in need is very kind. Thank you for sharing this poem