Thursday, March 26, 2020

The Great Peace Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am not sick-
Just feel like a siphon-
The sap of life drains out
From every pore of my skin.
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Savita Tyagi
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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 October 2021

A great poem pertaining to life, dream and death! Extremely well composed dear madam...5 stars.

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Valsa George 03 April 2020

I can thoroughly sense your thoughts and feel their full significance at a time when we are forced to stay indoors. This is especially tough for a person who gets carried away by the charms of Nature. Your longing for peaceful rest at a time when life is becoming more and more dreadful is quite rational! An excellent write.10 on 10

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While life is straining to divert the course of the injured towards it with its enchantments death assures deliverance from sufferings and pain. The Pacific may invite to its depths for eternal peace like a mother to her lap for solace. A meaningful poem on life dreams and death top marks

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 April 2020

This poem is so beautiful piece of solace desired comfort I went to see the PACIFIC OCEAN COMPOSED A POEM THE FAR PACIFIC WAS treated as a treat ma'am thanks for such a heart warming poem ppme rgds

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2020

A brilliant poem on dream, . Life and death is well executed. It is most beautiful poem based on philosophy which says much about soul, mind and body. The way of presentation is fantastic.

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Savita Tyagi 31 March 2020

Thanks Kumarmani ji for your inspirational comment.

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