The Great Oh-Dee Comments

(cont.) 'You're luck you're still-..ok, luck or lucky, i guess. ;) more favorites: They seem to take As smiles and sanity You continue to fake and i enjoyed the rhymes you threw in here and there. to MyPoemList. bri :) As smiles and sanity You continue to fake You thank the lord....i was taught, by example, to capitalize Lord if meaning God/Jesus, but i don't care, especially now that i'm a confirmed nonbeliever, ...but with an open mind.

is PH up to more tricks? ? : Hit the gorund....perhaps a gorund is a Chinese musical instrument? some favorite lines: It seems like a joke Like a game you're not playing Hopsital visit..i won't try guessing this one. and soon after: 'mourn. well mourning might be involved in the poem, but i think you 'want' morn (no apostrophe; i just checked) (cont.)

A sad poem even if the construct is well done.Read mine -Saturday Morning Mood - Adeline