The Great Lake. Comments
Taupo, tourist town,
is on the north of the lake:
Turangi is south.
I looked over the smooth waters,
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Moving in tourist tow beside lake gives view of landscape beauty and this entirely motivates mind. Blue morning shines with tender waves. This tanka is really very brilliant and motivational...10
There was a slight ripple over the blue water yesterday morning. I tried to play on the word 'blue', which can also mean 'downhearted'. A brilliant analysis on your part.
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7/29/2025 8:42:22 PM # 1.0.0
Michael, such a wonderful tanka๐๐๐
Thanks for your insightful comment on a short poetic form, which challenges the writer to the limit. Thanks for noticing.