The Great Exile Comments

I feel your words in this poem, a great write.

Your nostalgic memories have motivated you to write a beautiful poem raising a question(Does it teach me a lesson?) innovative. No where I read a question like this. The poem has a diction with all kinds of words. From my limited knowledge of grammar, I don't find any faulty line. The subject of the poem is good. Cheers multilingual Ramesh Rai!

this exile happens to most of the common man in the present day world............the combination with an epic is also great..........