Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Saturday, February 7, 2015

The Gravy Cake Comments

Rating: 4.9

One time my mother made a cake,
As lovely as could be.
This time she did no frosting make,
But caramel sauce, you see.
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Kim Barney
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Lyn Paul 02 July 2017

People have such odd taste buds I am sure someone would appreciate Mum's gravy on the cake. Lovely poem and also picture of your father. Thank You

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Bri Edwards 25 June 2017

already left comments. now it is time to put into my/our July 2017's 'showcase of and for PH poets', to be found in my poem list under July 2017's. follow my instructions to find this poem page again! thanks. pass the cake, please. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 28 July 2016

DAMN! IT IS KIM BARNEY! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! IN DISGUISE. I JUST LOOKED AT THE POET'S NOTES AND READ RECIFE, .........A DEAD GIVEAWAY. ESP. AFTER WHAT YOU TOLD ME RECENTLY ABOUT YOU AND YOUR PH NAMES. AND I KNEW I'D READ THAT FIRST OF 'YOUR' QUOTATIONS BEFORE TODAY. ABOUT RIVER RUNNING. FOOLED ME! ! BRI ;) SO, i'll add poem to list but maybe not you, whoever you are!

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Bri Edwards 28 July 2016

I SEE another comment has been left by you on one of my 'my english sucks' poems. i could not recall your name when i saw it. no photo or bio do i see. but i DID think this title familiar and the poem i certainly recognized. i may not have sent it yet to MyPoemList, but now i shall. your page now shows you as being a 'friend' of mine, and i suppose you were in my friends list. but i pared it down considerably recently for various reasons. now i'll add you again, just in case! if you would care to share this or another of your poems in what i call my 'monthly (usually) showcase for PH poets', where i display in one place, on my PH site, the poems of some of my PH friends, let me know. or ask questions of me. did the gravy taste ok on the meat at least? ? bri :)

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Geoffrey Fafard 23 June 2015

Ah.. how bitter sweet is this story my friend.All you have to do is open a cake shop with me now and we will have it sown up.Love this story. Cheers and thanks as always for your encouragement. Geoffrey.

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Elena Sandu 10 February 2015

Wonderful poem! Hahaha beautiful witty pen, thank you for sharing! Loved the picture too didn't know we can have own pictures displayed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 February 2015

Very nicely envisioned. Thanks for sharing.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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