The grave of my love
Has become a myth
Of ancient kingdom.
Forgotten smiles of long ago
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The imagery use in the poem is truly beautiful. Touching the heart of the reader.
A good attempt in the chapter of love, Shakil. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks
This is a marvelous poem on love having stunning expression. Nice penmanship. Let me quote some lines.. . My sobbing eyes, Full with droplets of tears, Wait for a force That will slither away Crimping darkness, and Wandering clouds From the sky of my heart. Nice metaphor too. Thanks.
This was very creative! I like the amount of depth you put into your love KW
Marvelous imagery to depict the pain of lost love. A 10.