Monday, August 7, 2017

The Grave Of My Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

The grave of my love
Has become a myth
Of ancient kingdom.
Forgotten smiles of long ago
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shakil ahmed
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Nosheen Irfan 14 August 2017

Marvelous imagery to depict the pain of lost love. A 10.

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Hans Vr 08 August 2017

The imagery use in the poem is truly beautiful. Touching the heart of the reader.

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 August 2017

A good attempt in the chapter of love, Shakil. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 August 2017

This is a marvelous poem on love having stunning expression. Nice penmanship. Let me quote some lines.. . My sobbing eyes, Full with droplets of tears, Wait for a force That will slither away Crimping darkness, and Wandering clouds From the sky of my heart. Nice metaphor too. Thanks.

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Kewayne Wadley 07 August 2017

This was very creative! I like the amount of depth you put into your love KW

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Badarpur, Assam, India.
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