Friday, June 10, 2005

The Grass Lady Comments

Rating: 3.0

She's our neighbor, a quite fussy one.
She cuts her grass twice a week,
scarcely giving the blades chance to grow,
and it is the trimmest yard on the block,
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Courtney Kane
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Max Reif 08 August 2005

Dear Courtney, I found this poem wonderfully playful and a delight to read! I don't find the last 1/3 quite up to the rest.

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Raynette Eitel 10 June 2005

Ah yes, this has a clear image and a strong message. Good job. Raynette

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Uriah Hamilton 10 June 2005

Both meaning and style here, thanks.

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