Sunday, June 28, 2009

The Grass Comments

Rating: 2.8

I am my Mother, as I weep
when reading of death and life,
knowing forever exists only in
the mind.
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Deb Fowler
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Tsira Goge 28 June 2009

Deb, The sad... It is very beautifully made...10... Tsita

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Craig Anderson 28 June 2009

Excellent piece. 'I see the grass has browned on the other side of the fence.' Very descriptive prose, well done. Regards Craig.

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~ Jon London ~ 28 June 2009

Very touching to read my lovely....expressed with love and understanding...beautiful tender expressed lines give this piece a loving feel....well penned 10+

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