Thursday, February 15, 2007

The Grainy Truth Comments

Rating: 4.5

The ceaseless pulse of time
Scrubbing the feet of the bay
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Jayne Downing
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Chuck Audette 12 March 2007

Lovely, you use the internal rhymes to nice effect, flows very nicely. -chuck

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