Sunday, May 20, 2012

The Grace Comments

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From the very start
He loves us
We had him in very close
We were loved by him
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Baharak Barzin
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Daniel Brick 15 December 2016

The confidence you express in this poem is very reassuring. You don't overstate it which would be counter-productive in any case. But your understatement has a very particular effect on me: it shows you are so certain this grace is real, and is RIGHT NOW flooding the world in its generous presence that you only need to remind us to welcome it. There is no need to be shrill or demanding on your part. We have already received the blessings of this grace, we just have not realized it. That's the gentle message of your poem.

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R Soos 21 November 2016

Thank you for including the reason we need grace: We hurt each other with the things we want to catch. Nicely done!

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James Mclain 10 November 2016

He whom graces our each soul with word's discerned in grace has knowledge found.. iip

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 December 2015

He is here in every breath of you He surrounds us By his grace Let's drown in his grace And enjoy joining him Forever and a day..... i understood your poem as a very spiritual poem. am i right? thank you very much. enjoyed reading it. tony

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