I walk carelessly down the dark road
My heavy black boots constantly clicking
Clicking on the cold cement
My long black and velvet Trench coat
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hi i really like your poem i do understand were you are comeing from lots of people judge people by there clothes etc before even knowing them i do have a few goth mates and they are relly nice people
intresting poem, i can imagine alotta of the stuff that is going on: P
this si such a goodo poem your so good at it i love this poem so much keep on doing waht your doing your good at it >>>
I loved the visualisation and I could almost hear the clicking shoes too. Great work. Keep writing.
My oh my! Don't I love your work, Ankoku. Lovely :)