Sunday, June 3, 2012

The Goodness Of The Ocean Comments

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What is it about a pond or lake or ocean
That attracts us so and sets in motion
Feelings of serenity and peace
So that common worries seem to cease
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Richard Lackman
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Payal Parande 16 September 2012

how brilliant just splendid poem sir....i have to confess that i am not fortunate enough that i haven't seen Ocean even once and i let be that way but after reading your poem i really wish to see it and one day i will and until then to satisfy myself i will come here and your poem so thank you for this wonderful piece love, payal

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Mandi June 05 July 2012

A delightful read, Mr. Lackman! You and I write very similarly in style, and I can really connect with your work. Thank you so much for this relaxing poem.

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Simon Collins 25 June 2012

Like a meditation, really enjoyable words, thanks

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Heather Wilson 04 June 2012

A beautiful poem, So calming just to walk along a quiet beach and just listen to the wash of the waves.

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Valerie Dohren 03 June 2012

Lovely poem Dick, water is so often very inspiring, maybe it is an unconscious reminder of our origins.

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