Friday, August 14, 2020

The Goodness In The Universe Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Goodness in the Universe

when the sun departed
you slept
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Soran M. H
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Tom Allport 08 July 2022

An inspirational write to look forward to another sun rise.

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Soran M. H 08 July 2022

Thanks Tom for this amazing way of reading and such a fantastic comment, well done

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 November 2021

Soran's poetry always showers wisdom and insight.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 November 2021

A magnificent poem well presented. Very inspiring and powerful.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 November 2021

The unceasing love, generosity and beauty of Mother Nature always alleviate humanity's harshness and cruelties.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 October 2021

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant....captivating expression! I have read some of your poems. You seem to be an inborn talent. I love your poetry dear poet.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 October 2021

Human being is at happiest level when he is able to see and enjoys the wonders of nature surrounding him. I add here God is omnipresent, I belief in God and I enjoy nature's nurturing. Finest poem you wrote, dear Soran. Truly enjoyed revisting your poem site

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 October 2021

Revisiting this magnificent and inspiring poem. Liked the closure lines. So discerning and powerful.

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Lee Boueri 05 November 2020

Beautiful imagery. Well penned.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 27 September 2020

The earth gives Immense potential to a wrtier

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Sandra Feldman 21 September 2020

How very moving and true. A very sensitive and wonderfully poetic Soul has here, spoken.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 September 2020

there …. a pure beauty and true loyalty still exists...........Yes, nature never disappoints us, true loyal all the time human nature oft imprints a gap a deepest hole but true loyalty still exists. Fully agree with your eyes for nature's pure beauty and your well captured mind, dear Poet Soran. Endlessly enjoyed your happy poem,5 stars. The picture added to the poem is fascinating.

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Chinedu Dike 10 September 2020

Well conceived and nicely brought forth with conviction. A fine and lofty verse.

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Susan Williams 30 August 2020

I so like the sweep of beauty and elegance in this piece, Soran. I think this is not the first time I will come back to read this beauty. nor will it be the last! ! I will give it more 10s but I do not know if they allow more than one 10 per person

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Soran M. H 28 August 2020

Thanks Kevin, yes you are right, always we can look into mirror of the nature and correct our mistakes

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Kevin Patrick 27 August 2020

A pure beauty and true loyalty... Oh what truth there is in these words to describe the eternal majesty of our world, we struggle through life forgetting the connection we have with this planet. It's our condition to forget the simplest things. There is goodness even if we forget it. A stellar work.

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Soran M. H 25 August 2020

Paul Brookes Hello and Thanks my gracious friend in poetry and warmly welcomed generous commentary. I hope you have enjoyed reading this humble poem. with kind Regards

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Paul Brookes 25 August 2020

Full of beautiful imagery A great poem to read at the beginning of everyday.

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

Dear poet Bharati Nayak hello Thank you for sparing your time to read my humble poem, , thank you for your generous commentary..

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Bharati Nayak 24 August 2020

then you knew there is no place for sadness in nature's carnival . there …. a pure beauty and true loyalty still exists- - - -Wonderful poem on nature.I particularly love the line- -'there is no place for sadness /in nature's carnival'.Nature constantly rejuvinate us. .

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Soran M. H 23 August 2020

Hello and thanks ANJANDEV ROY for your comment on this poem, I hope you have enjoyed reading it, ,

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