The Goodness in the Universe
when the sun departed
you slept
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A magnificent poem well presented. Very inspiring and powerful.
The unceasing love, generosity and beauty of Mother Nature always alleviate humanity's harshness and cruelties.
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant....captivating expression! I have read some of your poems. You seem to be an inborn talent. I love your poetry dear poet.
Human being is at happiest level when he is able to see and enjoys the wonders of nature surrounding him. I add here God is omnipresent, I belief in God and I enjoy nature's nurturing. Finest poem you wrote, dear Soran. Truly enjoyed revisting your poem site
Revisiting this magnificent and inspiring poem. Liked the closure lines. So discerning and powerful.
How very moving and true. A very sensitive and wonderfully poetic Soul has here, spoken.
there …. a pure beauty and true loyalty still exists...........Yes, nature never disappoints us, true loyal all the time human nature oft imprints a gap a deepest hole but true loyalty still exists. Fully agree with your eyes for nature's pure beauty and your well captured mind, dear Poet Soran. Endlessly enjoyed your happy poem,5 stars. The picture added to the poem is fascinating.
Well conceived and nicely brought forth with conviction. A fine and lofty verse.
I so like the sweep of beauty and elegance in this piece, Soran. I think this is not the first time I will come back to read this beauty. nor will it be the last! ! I will give it more 10s but I do not know if they allow more than one 10 per person
Thanks Kevin, yes you are right, always we can look into mirror of the nature and correct our mistakes
A pure beauty and true loyalty... Oh what truth there is in these words to describe the eternal majesty of our world, we struggle through life forgetting the connection we have with this planet. It's our condition to forget the simplest things. There is goodness even if we forget it. A stellar work.
Paul Brookes Hello and Thanks my gracious friend in poetry and warmly welcomed generous commentary. I hope you have enjoyed reading this humble poem. with kind Regards
Full of beautiful imagery A great poem to read at the beginning of everyday.
Dear poet Bharati Nayak hello Thank you for sparing your time to read my humble poem, , thank you for your generous commentary..
then you knew there is no place for sadness in nature's carnival . there …. a pure beauty and true loyalty still exists- - - -Wonderful poem on nature.I particularly love the line- -'there is no place for sadness /in nature's carnival'.Nature constantly rejuvinate us. .
Hello and thanks ANJANDEV ROY for your comment on this poem, I hope you have enjoyed reading it, ,
An inspirational write to look forward to another sun rise.
Thanks Tom for this amazing way of reading and such a fantastic comment, well done