Sunday, July 9, 2017

The Goodbye Comments

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You were mine
And I loved you,
As you deserved to be loved,
There was this charisma about you,
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Sandra Feldman
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Seamus O Brian 10 July 2017

A piece that pierces the heart slowly, with an irrepressible poignancy. I enjoyed the conversational tone of the start, mimicking the character of life, then threading the sharp edge of a blade honed with poetic vision to the center of our shared, resonating pain of lost love. Bravo, good poet.

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