Thursday, November 3, 2011

The Good Die Young Comments

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Job done, well done
Contract from the Lord expired
Duty to make His world
A better place beautifully done
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Ramesh Rai 30 June 2014

When the contract is expired and i do not wish to be the part of the fake contract of corrupted it is better to accept your verdict. A grand write.

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Black On Black Arts 18 February 2012

very good poem God would be proud job done well done

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Vipins Puthooran 18 February 2012

To sanctify our life follow the statutes of God! ! It's a great poem/top marks! ! !

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Michael Williams 18 February 2012

Well read poem. I like your faith and almost envy it. I feel that the esence of Humanity is to have a belief.

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Bella Hernandez 18 February 2012

Very true... exactly what i believe... just one thing... if u do what he commands and continue to do so... there are ppl that dont die young but die very old... ANYWAYS! ! ! splendid poem with truth in every line ~Bella

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