Friday, January 3, 2003

The Golden Toddy Comments

Rating: 3.2

We hunted, swept the planet pole to pole
to capture a glimpse of that rare species.

Through a thermal lens we spotted a shoal,
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Simon Armitage
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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 September 2022

Congratulations being chosen again, within one month, last was on the 27th of August recently and today again on the 11th Sept. Finest poem to be read, it is still a very pleasant read. Thank you for sharing, dear great Poet.

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Chinedu Dike 29 August 2022

Vivid imagery nicely depicted with lucidity of thought. A beautiful creation

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 August 2022

The author used lexical repetitions to emphasize a significant image; IN is repeated.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 August 2022

Congratulations being chosen by Poem Hunter and Team as The Modern Poem Of The Day.5 Stars TOP Score

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 July 2022

Wonderful poem with superb imagery.

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Luis Moreno 08 October 2023

Anybody knows what does Simon Armitage's book this poem belong to?

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 August 2021

Most deserving as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Very philosophically put. Very pleasant and an impressive read.5 Stars full

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Khairul Ahsan 17 December 2020

'out-glinting the best boy's tooth' - that's such a wonderful description! Heartiest congratulations on your poem’s selection as the ‘Modern Poem of the Day’!

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 December 2020

congrats again for being selected this beautiful poem after four months

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 December 2020

After months in the field, the broken yolks had gilded and glazed the presenter's boots; the sponsor's lover wore a precious skull for a brooch, out-glinting the best boy's tooth. Very fine poem. tony

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imperfect Idiot 17 December 2020

thats what i need hot toddy for my soul

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Kenneth Maswabi 17 December 2020

Wow...an amazing composition from the raw material of nature...most beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 15 August 2020

Brilliant as usual but what Simon wants to say in this golden toddy confused me a lot...10++

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M Asim Nehal 14 August 2020

I see it as mirage, it is bit on philosophical side where he is chasing something that never existed. Nice poem.10+

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 August 2020

Rank bad form. But the creature itself shone, perched on the clapper-board, the golden one....excellent sonnet on aquatic animal; I think it's an allegorical poem; poet very acutely delineated the human cruel character through this aquatic animal; enjoyable writings... Pleasure to read this poem is...

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L Milton Hankins 14 August 2020

Beautiful poem, well-executed, expressive. I like this very much.

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 May 2020

After months in the field, the broken yolks had gilded and glazed the presenter's boots; the sponsor's lover wore a precious skull for a brooch, out-glinting the best boy's tooth. a very fine poem

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Butch Decatoria 12 February 2019

I assume it is a sort of fish. But I’m still clueless, “quid plura”...

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Julia Luber 12 February 2019

resonant with pride of a hunter documentarian and the objectification of the animal they enslave to their 'watch'

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Adrian Flett 12 February 2019

All the technology and 'Rank bad form.' to produce a video of a rare species. The emphasis on the commercialism instead of the feeling for nature.

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Khairul Ahsan 23 January 2019

'Through a thermal lens we spotted a shoal, picked up the trail of nuggety faeces' - ha ha ha, well done, poet!

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