We hunted, swept the planet pole to pole
to capture a glimpse of that rare species.
Through a thermal lens we spotted a shoal,
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Vivid imagery nicely depicted with lucidity of thought. A beautiful creation
The author used lexical repetitions to emphasize a significant image; IN is repeated.
Congratulations being chosen by Poem Hunter and Team as The Modern Poem Of The Day.5 Stars TOP Score
Most deserving as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Very philosophically put. Very pleasant and an impressive read.5 Stars full
'out-glinting the best boy's tooth' - that's such a wonderful description! Heartiest congratulations on your poem’s selection as the ‘Modern Poem of the Day’!
congrats again for being selected this beautiful poem after four months
After months in the field, the broken yolks had gilded and glazed the presenter's boots; the sponsor's lover wore a precious skull for a brooch, out-glinting the best boy's tooth. Very fine poem. tony
Wow...an amazing composition from the raw material of nature...most beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Brilliant as usual but what Simon wants to say in this golden toddy confused me a lot...10++
I see it as mirage, it is bit on philosophical side where he is chasing something that never existed. Nice poem.10+
Rank bad form. But the creature itself shone, perched on the clapper-board, the golden one....excellent sonnet on aquatic animal; I think it's an allegorical poem; poet very acutely delineated the human cruel character through this aquatic animal; enjoyable writings... Pleasure to read this poem is...
Beautiful poem, well-executed, expressive. I like this very much.
After months in the field, the broken yolks had gilded and glazed the presenter's boots; the sponsor's lover wore a precious skull for a brooch, out-glinting the best boy's tooth. a very fine poem
I assume it is a sort of fish. But I’m still clueless, “quid plura”...
resonant with pride of a hunter documentarian and the objectification of the animal they enslave to their 'watch'
All the technology and 'Rank bad form.' to produce a video of a rare species. The emphasis on the commercialism instead of the feeling for nature.
'Through a thermal lens we spotted a shoal, picked up the trail of nuggety faeces' - ha ha ha, well done, poet!
Congratulations being chosen again, within one month, last was on the 27th of August recently and today again on the 11th Sept. Finest poem to be read, it is still a very pleasant read. Thank you for sharing, dear great Poet.