My daughter runs along the sand,
A golden kite string in her hand;
She calls and waves along the shore
Till I can’t see her anymore.
...
Read full text
wow, there is much pathos in this little poem. i just wonder whether leaving 'anymore' in the first stanza will give it more effect. just my thought. good poem. keep it up christine.
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
wow, there is much pathos in this little poem. i just wonder whether leaving 'anymore' in the first stanza will give it more effect. just my thought. good poem. keep it up christine.